You should finish it up.. Good animation for the little bit you have.
Simple, yet effective
Good job. I think it's alright that it's short. If it was longer, it would just take away from what you have.
Expand on it a bit.
Definitely one of my favorite pieces on this site. I love the art style and all of the coll animations. Great job! I can tell a lot of work went into this.
Work on your animation and how you present the story. This could work if you used better angles and made it a bit more suspenseful.
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